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Offline Shery deWinter

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also, i decided i didn't like my original suggestion for the stats ^.^

how about

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and keep it centered/quoted?
Fake and gay or accidentally skipped over? lol


Offline Lucian Drakul

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It shows its quoted like 3 times....hmm...might just be a glitch, but I did like your idea.

Offline Goddess Petra

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two camels in a car?

but why does it need to be dark times? cant it be mildly dark times with happy times some places?

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Guess happy or dark is all in the minds eye. To me, things are great...the Jedi think that everything is bad.

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If they still have the ability to think, the Sith are slacking

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well.. being a more serious here... lot of places are set with dark times... if it peaceful among the groups, is it really dark times?

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Good question.

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Yeah, I am formulating something like a cease-fire with the Jedi at the moment, but it is true that most places are set with a dark and foreboding format.

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we need to set us apart from others... well that will help and having me here adds to it too ...  *sings happy days song*

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Yeah, I will remind myself to change that now....just as soon as I figure out the best word choice.

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There, hows that?

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yay liking it

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but thats me and im easy to please *wink wink *

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I will keep that in mind.

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There...banner is linked, and I believe that should be very nearly the final draft.

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much better, the banner makes it pop. people are visual creatures after all

Offline Lucian Drakul

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Good point, and that banner that we have sets the mood for a new party.

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last sentence doesn't make sense grammatically

As you can see from our stats, we are highly active. Those stats are always on the way up, so drop in to say hello and then see if you will be joining in the Galaxy set in “A Long, Long Time Ago in a Galaxy Far, Far Away” is something you are interested in.

Should be either "Those stats are always on the way up, so drop in to say hello and then see if you will be joining in the Galaxy set in “A Long, Long Time Ago in a Galaxy Far, Far Away”"

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" Those stats are always on the way up, so drop in to say hello and then see if joining the Galaxy set in “A Long, Long Time Ago in a Galaxy Far, Far Away” is something you are interested in."

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"something else"

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There...all is now well.